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Comm/Raff: Cordis

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Finished Raffle prize for :iconjjvanhossen: of his awesomely sexy OC Cordis > u <

i had so much fun drawing her, and i got to try out a few new things as well

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Cordis belongs to: JJVanHossen

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Thank you Flesh-Odium for helping me out with the issues of this pose xD
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First of all I find it sort of weird that you ask for a critique for this one... I've checked your gallery, you've got some pretty interesting work. But this... I wouldn't really consider one of them.

It's a pretty stock standard pose made somewhat better by the nice shading and color work. The character herself is alright. Again nothing really new, but there's a nice contrast between the blue hair and the red eyes. The outfit is... somewhat interesting. In the sense that I can't remember the last time I saw spandex warn OVER bandages for no apparent reason. So style points on the thighs.

The anatomy is alright. Right arm being able to bend that way only slightly questionable. And although it's obviously been designed to accentuate certain "features". My only problem with it would be that the back is a little odd. As in, I'm not sure if it's all there. The angle at which it rises seams a bit to steep, made a little worse by how the hair appears to flow down a bit to far making the the curve in the back look even more suspicious.

Over all, it's pretty alright. Nothing new, but nothing bad either. So for what it's worth, nice work.